Griffonmender's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LEGO Sonic vs Metal (2021)]

The motion blur effect is really creative.

[Super Smash Exercise Bros.]

Entertaining, but sound design could use some work- it gets extremely loud really quickly.

ShonieBoy responds:

Noted! I'll work on that for future projects. Oof, the PK fire part was especially terrible. Thanks for the feedback, and thanks for watching!

[Sunny Vibes [Chill LoFi]]

Animation portion is lacking.
Maybe just upload the songs to the audio portal instead?

[Calico: "Mexican Restaurants"]

It's alright, but the sound mixing is way off.
The cat character is significantly louder than any other character, the note paper guy is almost inaudible unless you turn the volume waaaay up, and the theme song at the start is even louder than anything else in the entire video.
The explosion in the mansion(?) is also overly loud compared to the rest of the scene it's in.
If you turn up the volume to have a chance at hearing the quieter character, the theme song and aforementioned explosion is deafening.
Some of the stickman's lines are also much louder than the other characters in the scenes he's in, and blue hat guy is too soft at times as well.
The animation is fine, and the writing is serviceable, but the sound needs work.

[The Little Girl]

I Should have watched this sooner.

[Dead Shift]

Sound mixing seems a bit off- Hunter's dialogue especially tends to be too soft.
Overall though, I enjoyed it.

[Shelly Kitten #2 - Elliot's Worry]

Nothing really happened.
Feels incomplete, like it was taken out of the middle of something longer.
There isn't really an end or a punchline(or if there was punchline, it was not delivered well.).

Out of the three shorts currently in this series, this is undoubtedly the weakest.
1 and 3 aren't exactly sprawling, expansive stories, but there is at least *something* there.

The art is cute, but there just isn't enough here to justify its own video.

[Livia life]

Can't be posting character creator stuff in the portals on Newgrounds, kid.
Especially when that portal in question is Movies, and the submission is unanimated. ^ ^;
Try pinning your youtube video in a News post on your profile next time.

[SnapCube Brickfilm]

Not a bad start, but editing could use some work.
There's a few spots in the beginning where Spidey isn't fully cut out.
Audio is a bit rough as well- maybe speak up a bit next time?
Some sound effects for the web slinging could help as well.

WandWStudios responds:

Okay thanks, I'll keep this in mind

[Waracna trailers serie]

Animation quality is very inconsistent.
There are some shots that are pretty good and others that are very lacking.
There are some featuring excellent examples of foreshortening, but then there are others with characters that are heavily offmodel or reduced to undetailed stick figure models.

The text is filled with spelling and grammatical errors to the point where some of the lines shown on screen are incomprehensible.

The basic concept, from what I could gather, seems interesting, but going from what the trailer shows, it seems in need of some more polish.