Griffonmender's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The BSG Pre-Series Miniseries (Part III: The Morning Rendezvous)]

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[shrimpules]

animation is fine, text to voice is physically painful.
Consider a voiceover and/or voiceacting for future projects.
I like the shrimpule design. They seem very sweet.

[Moth flying and cat hunting flipbook]

Not bad, but you may want to keep your characters farther away from the spine next time.
The angle used when filming combined with their placement on the pages made it a bit hard to see.

[2011 Pantufa traditional flipnote animation]

Cute, but video quality could be better.

[How Not To Watch TV!]

The concept isn't bad, but the execution could be better.
The set is empty, and I wouldn't know that the tv as a tv if it hadn't been mentioned in the description. Some of the shots show the room outside the set, which breaks immersion somewhat.

The actual animation is pretty smooth, and I quite like how the entity moves.
The set just needs a bit of dressing so it looks a bit more like a room and a bit less like a box.

Asskick247 responds:

I just don’t know if I have the materials, thx anyway I suppose

[Star preforms lightning jump]

Not bad.

It might be worth it to pay the $10 bucks for Flipaclip to get extra layers and get rid of the watermark.

You could also try using a video editing program to slap a white square on top of the watermark.
Out of the free and watermark free programs I've looked. through, clipchamp seems like the best bet: https://clipchamp.com/en/

Alternatively, there is an app called video eraser used in this tutorial that can be used to remove the watermark:https://www.reddit.com/r/YoutubeTutorials/comments/9v0zdq/how_to_remove_flipaclip_watermark/

These solutions will be more difficult to accomplish the more complicated the background becomes, but they should work as an effective bandage until the flipaclip upgrade or a different program has been purchased.

ZiyKiy responds:

Thanks for the tips I really appreciate it

[Grimkin Simple Animation]

Looks cool- I'd recommend just paying the ten bucks for Flipaclip, though.
You get rid of the watermark and gain the benefits of additional layers.

WorldDominatinCrea responds:

ok I put more layers for the next animation and thank you for the advice.

[Special Delivery - LEGO Stop Motion]

That escalated quickly.
I like the choice of the older style cat.

JOCoStudio1 responds:

It looks so disarmingly docile... Do not be deceived!

[Minecraft Fishing - Animation]

I'm pretty sure my entire supply of good fishing rods was caught with one normal fishing rod.

[Dragon And Kitty]

They're so cute. ^ ^