Griffonmender's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cloud's buddy Sephiroth]

Maybe he should have talked about a movie that didn't begin with a man losing the love of his life...

Doobus-Goobus responds:

Gave me a little grin

[GALAXY RIVALS]

Interesting, but some items, especially the flames, seem to need more frames to keep them from doing the weird flickering thing.

The closed eye shot went on a little bit too long, but otherwise this is an ok start.

[TANKMAN VS BOYFRIEND {WEEK 7} GUNS ANIMATION]

An ok start, but could use some work.
There really should be more variety of movement- boyfriend seems to only raise his arm and that's it.
Tankman especially needs more poses and frames in general, as he moves like he's being warped by the transform effect rather than doing anything on his own.

Likewise, the characters have multiple small errors like lines in places they shouldn't be and Boyfriend being weirdly orange.

The part where you used the actual sprites did not do you any favors.
Not only did the zoom in on Tankman cause it to become extremely blurry, but it called attention to the above issues, as well as inconsistencies in the designs you made for the characters, especially Boyfriend.
I hadn't even noticed his bangs were the wrong shape until you threw up one of his actual sprites, at which point it became very noticeable.
Further, it's just kind of lazy looking- especially when the same characters could have been drawn standing still in one shot fairly easily.

My advice would be to take a closer look at the Tankman and Boyfriend assets, especially the sprite sheets.

Not only would these be a good reference to keep them looking on model, but looking at the individual frames on these sheets could help give you a better idea of how to pose and animate these -and other- characters in a more interesting way.

Also, if you need to zoom in on an image, either use one with a very high dpi, start out with a much larger image than you need, or use a vector.
Low quality raster images do not like being zoomed in on. ^ ^;

CupAnimations responds:

im sorry im just new...

[CUT THE LETTUCE (Fixed)]

Not a bad start, but a bit short.
Might want to fade out the end a bit so the cut audio at the end is less noticeable.

[Jotaro VS DIO// My songs know what you did in the dark]

As a AMV, this is great, but between this not being an original animation and using a copyright song in the video, this violates terms of service on Newgrounds and thus, doesn't belong here.

Try putting things like this on Youtube instead in the future.

[VS Tord Remastered but Error Version VS Tom VS Tom Monster - FNF CARDBOARD Edition]

Animation is good, but you probably should have had "error" in the beginning of the title, and save people some confusion.
Although, this sounds more like the Friday Night Funkin But Bad mod than like an "error."

Maybe we could see a version of this animation with the proper version of the song at some point?

[Friday Night Funkin: The Anime!! Week 1]

The intro section was very rough and the images in it were extremely compressed.
It didn't really add to the video.

The animation was ok in parts, but the way a character would somehow lose the colors they just had in that very same shot was strange, and a bit distracting.
It also appears unfinished in some parts.

Voice acting was ok.

The alternative girlfriend design was actually pretty cute.
I quite like it.

Overall, it's pretty rough, but it has some potential.

ZykicoBeast responds:

I'll try to improve upon this in my future animations.

[Space Face (Part 1)]

If anyone is looking for part two, it's over on the Eddsworld channel on youtube.
(That's also where Power Ed and Trick or Threat can be found- among others.)

[Monster! [FNF]]

I like it. ^ ^
(I actually made a lemon demon movie for Pico Day myself.)

[Another average Pico Day]

That was fun.
(And hey, you definitely made a more finalized animation than I did. ^ ^;)